Sunday, May 22, 2011

Detect the Story 2

Chapter Two Apartment Noise
Leah grabbed a tissue and began to dab her eyes. Before living a life of real adventure, she thought she would live a life of fake adventure, or very fake sappy romance. But it was this Sap that gave her the strength and courage not to let her life be that ho hum and dreary. She thought if she ever let her self get that way, she would have the temptation to shoot herself in the head. No chance of romance happening with Kent. He was about as romantic as a Pepe La Pu. The stink of his cheesy male macho ness was enough to make any women laugh so hard they would wet their paints. It reminded her of the time she did pee her pants while babysitting with her sister at age 12. You see...
CRASH
What was that. Oh man. Her fat neighbor Fred Leroy seemed to always cause a loud crash of some kind. She usually went to help him, cause her curiosity got the best of her, and her kind compassion usually made her help him. There was always a Chocolate Ho Ho in it for her. She went back to her tv show.
CRASH
Curiosity was beginning to take over. She was heading for the door when she slipped on some ice she had dropped on the floor earlier.
POW POW POW
Bullet fire went bursting over her head and into her Mirror. “Oh man. Someone is trying to kill me.” Meaning that this case is probably bigger then I think. Someone thinks I’m in the way.” Just when I was going to get a good nite’s rest.” Leah did not startle easy. Mainly because she was impatient. She didn’t want to wait to find out all the bad scary details, she just made the necessary dictions. The gun fire continued. But from where she did not know. Man she was missing her show. “Grrrr” , she hissed. All of a sudden the gunfire stopped. The electricity went out. Silence. “Great.”
BING
The lights went back on. And standing over Leah was a tall man in a dark Coat. He had on a black hood. His face could not be seen.
“Leah McCann?” She sat there, having peed her pants, thinking outloud,
“Yeah!”
“I have a message for you” He opened his hand. And in it was.....................


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