Monday, May 23, 2011

UA MR CAS Clean Up Crew

UA MR CAS's Clean Up Crew
Setting: Coffee Shop
Different people are at different tables drinking coffee and eating pastries.
Oliver Wright Elf: Three Wrights don't make wrong.
Wilber Wright Elf: Three Wright's make it Right
Christopher Wright Elf: Due to the time constraints of the author's life and the complexibility of his work, we the Wright Brother Elves were given the rites to make this story come out all right
by writing it off. That's what we do.
WWE: We are...
All Three: The Wright Brother Elf's.
WWE: Dedicating to making a story comes out all right.
OWE: This story needs to finish somehow. But it has lots of Loop holes, fragmented pieces and complex scenario's. But its gong to be hard to mend together in one piece. It was never intended to
be a complete simple work, but it started to try and go in that Direction. The author was hoping that someone else might add something and help him finish it. Well someone has.
WWE: Yeah Us.
OWE: Of course if this thing is to ever be published, it needs to be rewritten. That may or may not get done, But the first thing is to put a little closure on this first rough draft of the story. The author always starts and never finishes his works. So even if it’s never to be worked on again, it will have somewhat of a completion.
CWE: When it is rewritten, some things should be deleted, such as the personal reference stuff written just for the sake of nostalgia sake. Example is the Principal coming out to attack FunnyMan.
Anti-Critic Jack: Either add more or cut it out entirely
WWE: Cut it out ACJ. You've had your take. SCRAM
(a huge cain comes out and snatches Jack away)
CWE: As we were saying,
OWE: And then there the various climax's and cliffhangers that have had no resolution.
WWE: And then there is the overall lack of a central focus or theme to the unstructured plot.
CWE: We have developed a working thesis for what the overall goal and plot of what the story is.
WWE: We will try to explain it to you as simply and non-complexing as possible. And remember we have not worked out all the details.
POW POW POW
A man pulls out a gun and starts to shoot at the Write Bros Elves. He shoots a hole into their plans.

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